Attn: biz owners, coaches, and creative entrepreneurs!
When you look at your sales copy…
If something feels off- it probably is
If you have that feeling in your gut that your sales page isn't quite right, but you don't know why…LISTEN!
You have 2 options today:
1: Leave it alone. Just deal with your low conversions and confused customers. It is what it is.
2. Get a copy review and deep dive audit from a pro copywriter and fix the problems before they dry up your dreams.
Yes, your friends look at your copy, and you can even ask ChatGPT to tell you how great it is…
But they won’t be able to tell you:
- This line? Momentum killer.
- You skipped the trust building part right here.
- That call-to-action? Feels desperate.
- This spot is confusing, you just LOST the reader.
- Your copy is trying too hard here.
- You missed the window to show value before the price.
- THIS line is gold, why is it hiding?
But I can. ChatGPT and your biz bestie can hype you up to make sales, but I'm the one who can show you where your copy is missing the mark and how to fix it. All without making you feel dumb. THEN those sales actually happen. 😉
all you needed was a set of fresh eyes on your copy
"Camille knows how to fix your copy and boost conversions. And as a natural-born teacher, she explains it without making you feel dumb. Hire her if you want your sales copy to work better than it is now." -Adam Hillis
✅ It's true, with me you'll get bite-sized, clear explanations (former teacher vibes—no jargon, no judgment. I won't make you feel dumb for not knowing). I'll just make your copy smarter.
✅ And because I write copy professionally for some of the biggest names in digital marketing, you can trust the feedback I give you. If I say something is working, it's because it IS WORKING RIGHT NOW.
$497
for up to 10 pages of copy + a 15-min Zoom call for questions
How it Works:
👉 After checkout, you'll be instantly sent a form to submit your copy for review. This can be ANY copy (sales page, landing page, website, promo emails, etc.) that's keeping you up at night.
👉For 3-5 days your copy is evaluated against my master list of essential must-haves for high-converting copy. I note what's working, what's not working, what's missing, and what tweaks will save your bacon.
👉You'll get my completed evaluation form AND a 15 minute Zoom. I will walk you through my recommendations, show you why they work for your niche, and answer any questions you have about fixing your copy. You can pick my brain, I'm all yours!
take lauren, signature program designer…
Lauren knew her program was powerful, her clients raved about it. But after one too many sales calls with the wrong people, she realized something was off.
Her sales page wasn't attracting her dream clients…it was repelling them. 😬
Then came the Copy Review.
And WHOA, we uncovered the culprits:
➡️A missing headline that killed curiosity
➡️Bullets that were confusing
➡️An FAQ section that flat-out contradicted the promise at the top
(No wonder her ideal clients scrolled away thinking, “This isn't for me.”)
The twist? Lauren had GOLD buried in her copy, a brilliant section that spoke perfectly to her ideal client, hiding in plain sight.
Now it's front and center. One review, total transformation. 👏👏👏
Hi, I'm Camille Pardo
Copywriter + Marketing Strategist
I'm the one who will tell you if your copy is on life support. And show you how to breathe life into it.
I help creative entrepreneurs get clear on their message, attract dream clients, and make sales without wanting to light their hair on fire.
Because here's the thing- good copy isn't just about sounding pretty.
It's about selling. It's about getting results.
And when you've got someone (hi, me 👋) who actually does this in the industry, you can trust that if I say it's working, it's because it actually is. No fluff, no guesswork- just copy that converts.
Your words are the first impression- let's make them powerful, profitable, and impossible to ignore.